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Today, I woke up late again and still feel sleepy. I think I won't force my self to work right away. I will sleep for 15 minutes before I rise up. I am going to work hard today, instead.
20 feb. 2023 02:58
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Today, I woke up late again and still feel sleepy. I think I won't force myself to work right away. I will sleep for 15 minutes before I rise. I am going to work hard today instead.
Perfect. "Myself" is one word. "Rise" is better here than "rise up", though the latter is certainly not wrong. "Rise up" is more dramatic than "rise". For example, listen to the song "Summertime" by George Gershwin from "Porgy and Bess" which contains the line "One of these mornings / You're going to RISE UP singing / Then you'll spread your wings / And you'll take the sky". Thank you for not saying "get up". It's always better to avoid "get" when you can find a better word.
20 februari 2023
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Today, I woke up late again and still feel sleepy. I won't force myself to start work right away. Instead I will sleep for 15 minutes before I get up. I am going to work hard today.
20 februari 2023
1
Today, I woke up late again and still feel sleepy. I think I won't force my self
to work right away. I will sleep for 15 minutes before I rise up. I am going to
work hard today.
很好
20 februari 2023
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