Three weeks ago, I performed in a dance show at my university festival. It was a really fun and exciting experience because many people came to watch our performance. I felt a little nervous before going on stage, but once the music started, I forgot about my worries and enjoyed dancing with my teammates.Right after the festival ended, our dance club started practicing for another event. It's for our Christmas party. At the party, each dance team will perform a special number, and there will also be dance battles and presents. I decided to join five different dance numbers for this event. That means I have a lot of practices every day, and sometimes it’s hard to balance school, part-time job, and dance practice. Even though it’s tiring, I’m really looking forward to it. I think it will be a great chance to make good memories with my friends and improve my dancing skills. I can’t wait for the Christmas party.

Three weeks ago, I performed in a dance show at my university festival. It was a really fun and exciting experience because many people came to watch our performance. I felt a little nervous before going on stage, but once the music started I forgot about my worries and enjoyed dancing with my teammates/classmates. Right after the festival ended, our dance club started practicing for another event. It's for our Christmas party. At the party, each dance team will perform a special number, and there will also be dance battles/competitions and exchanging presents. I decided to join five different dance numbers for this event. That means I have a lot of practice sessions every day, and sometimes it’s hard to balance school, my part-time job, and dance practice. Even though it’s tiring, I’m really looking forward to it. I think it will be a great chance to make good memories with my friends and improve my dancing skills. I can’t wait for the Christmas party. Well done. This is a really good piece of English writing. I’m really impressed. Keep it up. And happy dancing! Teacher Simon