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Seeing more white hairs on Mom's head than last year while I've done nothing to repay her years of sacrifice. It fills me with guilt. In lonely corners where nobody sees - like right now - I secretly let my tears fall

14 jul. 2025 14:58

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Seeing more white hairs on Mom's head than last year, while I've done nothing to repay her years of sacrifice, fills me with guilt. In lonely corners where nobody sees — like right now — I secretly let my tears fall.

This is beautifully written and quietly heavy. You’ve said so much in so few words. I made a few small tweaks just to help it flow a little better. Keep writing! Great job!

14 jul. 2025 19:25

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