Nayane Medeiros
Well, my job is to make clothes for women, I sew in my room, it is not very comfortable but every beginning is difficult. First i to draw the dress ou blouse, before I I make the mold and to finish I sew.
13 okt. 2020 13:32
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Well, my job is to make women’s clothes. I sew in my room. It is not very comfortable, but everything in the beginning is difficult. First, I draw out the dress or blouse before I make the pattern. Finally, I sew.
You must use periods between sentences instead or commas. Otherwise, it is an error called a comma splice. “Clothes for women” is correct, but “women’s clothes” sounds better because it is less wordy.
14 oktober 2020
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Well, my job is to make clothes for women, I sew in my room, it is not very comfortable but everything is difficult at the beginnin. First I need to draw a dress for a blouse, before I make it into the mold and then sew it.
13 oktober 2020
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