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Can you check Is there any mistake in it . Whenever I needed you I found you have always stood by my side and that thing of your really meant a lot to me.
17 sep. 2014 10:19
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The tenses are a bit confusing. "Whenever I needed you I found you always stood by my side, and that trait of yours really meant a lot to me." I added the comma just to create a mental pause for understanding. Also, I removed "have" because I don't think it's necessary and it changes from the past tense, which is a bit confusing. Finally, I changed "thing" to "trait" and corrected "your" with the proper possessive pronoun "yours" for that situation.
17 september 2014
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