Is it correct?
Hello! If I´m writing an email asking for information is it correct to say: "I am writing to request further information about your course, as I am really interested in participating and the clarification of the following details. Firstly..."?

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Hello! If I´m writing an email asking for information is it correct to say: "I am writing to request further information about your course, as I am really interested in participating and the clarification of the following details. Firstly..."?

I am writing to request further information about your course as I am really interested in enrolling. I would like to ask for clarification about the following details OR I would like to clarify certain points regarding:
Firstly...

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Hello ,
If I´m to write an email asking for information, is it correct to say, "I am writing to request further information about the course you are offering as I am really interested in it, but I need clarifications on the following details. Firstly.. ?"
Please check the punctuations .

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