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语法问题(如果用一句话表达,这句话有没有毛病?谢谢!) There was an interesting story in Song dynasty that a farmer was long to find a rabbit by waiting nearby a big tree since he once unexpectedly got a rabbit that run to the big tree from somewhere and break off its neck, dying instantly,but passing a year, farmer got nothing, the grass over the ground. ( i know i should divide this sentece , but i wonder if is right to combine one sentence? Thanks!)
31 okt. 2016 00:58
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There is an interesting story in Song dynasty that a farmer was long to catch rabbits by waiting nearby a big stump after he once unexpectedly caught a rabbit that had run into the big stump out of nowhere, broken its neck and died instantly. After a year of sitting there, the farmer hasn't seized a single rabbit and grass has grown all over the ground. I think this is longest you can get. You can't expand the size of a sentence simply by adding the conjunction 'but' when its meaning is complete. 个人觉得英语里非常注重句子的逻辑关系,如果一个句子的逻辑关系已经完整,就一定要句号,强行用连接词把不存在逻辑关系的句子接上,反而会让你的分数更低(考虑你应该是作文需要)。
31 oktober 2016
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