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If you could tell me which word are mispronunced would be good for me :)

I'm a sick man... an unpleasant man. I think my liver is diseased.I don't treat it and never have, though I respect medicine. Besides, I'm extremely superstitious. No, I refuse to treat it out of spite. You probably will not understand that. Well, but I understand. I know better than anyone that by all this I'm only injuring myself. But still, if I don't treat it is from spite. My liver is bad, well then-- let it get even worse!”

Question

Recording -30 seconds
https://clyp.it/k52iqgho

If you could tell me which word are mispronunced would be good for me :)

I'm a sick man... an unpleasant man. I think my liver is diseased.I don't treat it and never have, though I respect medicine. Besides, I'm extremely superstitious. No, I refuse to treat it out of spite. You probably will not understand that. Well, but I understand. I know better than anyone that by all this I'm only  injuring myself. But still, if I don't treat it is from spite. My liver is bad, well then-- let it get even worse!”

Answer

You pronounce the letter "i" like the Spanish one, it always sounds like "ee." If you could fix this you would sound a lot better.

You didn't pronounce the "t" correctly in "not."

Again, completely understandable.