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Please correct "they don't deserve actually." Please, correct and can I use the word actually, here for a formal essay?. There are several reasons to believe that artists are paid unnecessarily high wage that they don't deserve actually.
11 nov. 2017 15:51
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Using your sentence as a basis, I would wordsmith it as: There are several reasons to believe that artists are paid unnecessarily high *wages* that they don't *actually* deserve. - Wages isn't the word we tend to use in this case. A wage would imply something recurring (like a weekly payment), but usually, artists are paid for a project, so the more appropriate word here is "salary" or "artists receive/are given unnecessarily high/large compensation". -You could also use the word "merit" to indicate something "deserved with effort." Ex: There are several reasons to believe that artists are paid disproportionately high salaries that are not merited.
11 november 2017
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How about this? Actually, there are several reasons to believe that artists are paid undeserved, out-of-proportion wages. I hope it helps!
11 november 2017
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