Can you correct my Comic Book?
Hey guys,

I'm writing a new comic book that'll be send for a producer from Los Angeles and I'd like a native to review the script for me.
I'm going to give the credit on this Comic Book for who help me.

Kindly,
Ariane Fernanda.

Question

Can you correct my Comic Book?
Hey guys,

I'm writing a new comic book that'll be send for a producer from Los Angeles and I'd like a native to review the script for me. 
I'm going to give the credit on this Comic Book for who help me.

Kindly,
Ariane Fernanda.

Answer

Hi Ariane,

I'll let Sophie decide whether or not this is something she would like to review. If not I probable can help out if need be. I would need to better understand the comic book format, before I can commit any time.

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Hi Ariane,

I can help you if you’re still looking for assistance.

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Hi Sophie. I need to send for the drawer on the next week. There're 26 pages