Your cursive is just brilliant! Very easy to read and to understand, I would make a clearer difference in between ב and ד:)

Your handwriting is grear. ב+נ. Shouldnt technically go under the line but in free handwriting like this, especially with songs and just draft it might give it a natural flow actually. I'd probably make the ב in the couple last words a bit smaller in size, but overall looking really good. Onte typo, לחפש with ש. Good luck💫

To answer honestly your question about the beauty of your cursive - at the moment, it’s more like a nice boy cursive, not yet on the beautiful girl cursive spectrum. I added my handwriting to the song. Notice first the roundness of the letters and their volume. They are smaller and more compact. You correctly noticed, for example, that the ב' shouldn’t go below the line. And more than that - look at how in my ב it folds into itself and then goes down, while in yours it looks like a כ with a flick added at the bottom. Your נ is good by the way, it looks great when it goes belowe the line. PS - I LOVE Idan Raichel, that's a great choice of song!