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I ate ice cream with my family last night. It was a limited time flavor and really yummy. My sister, my cousin, and I went for a walk at midnight yesterday. It was a little scary, but we had a good time. We went to Costco today. I ate a hot dog and drank orange juice. I was so full after that, but it made me happy.
22 jun. 2025 02:59
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I ate ice cream with my family last night. It was a limited time flavor and
really yummy. My sister, my cousin, and I went for a walk at midnight yesterday.
It was a little scary, but we had a good time. We went to Costco today. I ate a
hot dog and drank orange juice. I was so full after that, but it made me happy.
Limited-time flavor.
I would encourage you to use more paragraph spacing when you make changes to the subject focus.
Also, try to use more connectors to organise your writing. I can help here. Feel free to message me for any doubts about anything I've written.
Well done on your entry! As it is clear and understandable.
22 jun. 2025 03:55
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