I bought new shoes (a new pair of shoes) this week! My favourite idol is an ambassador for my new shoes’ company. So I wanted some goods/items from the company. Finally, I got some!!! My choice was a black pair. These days, my old white ones have broken and got dirty. They were my favourites, so I was sad. When I had to get a new pair, I noticed that my favorite idol was to be an ambassador for the shoe company. It was such nice timing. I went to the store quickly, and I got a pair ! And they are the same as my friend’s. The day was pretty good. Well done Aii. You wrote well. The main error you made is confusing singular and plural. One shoe (I’ve lost a shoe) but a pair (two) of shoes. So you went to the store and bought a pair. So everything must be plural. You bought a pair of shoes, you bought some shoes, your old white ones got dirty etc