Hello Naimah your sentences are great it shows hard work but if you would like to have some conversational practice do contact me on italki

This post doesnt have many issues. I recommend you try different methods such as. Watching tv or other media in English, reading, or English workbooks. Once you find the one you like keep practicing and .ake sure to periodically check into italki and do some speaking practice. I hopw this helps, keep up the hard work!