Appreciation to whom correct my writing ;) Monetary crisis 1997/1998 shows that Small and Medium Enterprise (SME) able to shore up economy while many big industries being fall down. In 2012, around 56.534.592 unit or 99.99% from total unit of SME absorbs more than 107.657.509 labors or around 97.16%. Rahman (2009) concludes that the role of UMKM to the economy had contributed in minimizing inflation rate, reducing unemployment rate as well as job opportunities enlargement. The benefit of SME in labor market is important aspect to endorse economy growth as well as improve inclusive development. To realize, UNDP underlined the importance of productive labor creation. Briefly, ADB defines that inclusive development as multiplier growth which is followed by equity of opportunity. ADB noted that Inclusive Growth Index of Indonesia is around 4.4 in 2010. The Index is obtained from data set over the last two decades until it had publised in 2010. Among the components, poverty is recorded as the lowest point caused by highly Indonesia poverty rate during economy crisis 1997/1998, while two primary development component and labor scored 4 which means out of criteria.

Need to correction please ;) Inclusive Development After economic downturn during Asia financial crisis 1997/1998, Indonesia economy rose in a good growth. It was indicated by increasing real GDP growth stand at positive growth during global decreasing economy due to financial crisis 2009. Over the last five years, economy grew up to 6.00 % as well as drop of poverty rate. The Central Bureau of Statistics reported that poverty rates decrease from 8.46% to 5.92% in February 2013 while Gini coefficient rose from 0.35 to 0.41 from 2008 to 2012. This condition represents that welfare gap between the rich and the poor being wider. The growing economy which is not followed by prosperity equity is diversion of national declaration on improving social welfare, while the governmental programs are not only halted on reduction the poverty but also inclusive development. Asian Development Business Strategy 2020 depicts one pillar of inclusive development is high economy growth as well as guarantee sustainability of economy access. Furthermore, inclusive development needs social security which protects citizen from shock economy.

How people can live without technology Today, gadgets such as smartphone, notebook or even tablet are very close in human’s life enable people to do some activities easier. Some duties for instance, ordering airline ticket, purchasing new stuff are deal in a very short time. It seems efficient because it does not need much time as well as shortening distance, therefore we can gain our time to be more productive. Otherwise, how people can live without those ? So far, people will burden costly and lack of useful time to move forward.

Need corrections: How To Invite Rural People To Deposit Their Money In The Bank The Indonesian government has an obligation to expand financial services in rural area due to very low participation rate in banking. It is called financial inclusion which provides various services, for example, saving, financing and insurances. Based on G-20 Meeting last month, every country had to improve amount of participants until 60% in 2018. This goal is expected to accomplish financing and saving growth among poor people, in order activate real sector in any fields. The President urged Governor of Central Bank to facilitate an appropriate regulation to endorse this program and reduce bottle necking which is an primary obstacle today.

Need correction "Inflation Rate vs Rising of Fuel Price" More than one month, Government had increased subsidized-fuel price by 6,500 or around 30% increasing. It’s because of over deficit national budget which came from petrol subsidy. Nevertheless, the proportion between deficit budget and amount of GDP will be over more than 3.0% and will breach in respecting Legislative’s Rules. On the other hand, the hiking of subsidized-fuel affects pricing of other goods, such as transport cost, food expenses. Its condition enable endorse inflation rate higher in the end. President Susilo in the last conference said government face a difficult situation between impact of inflation and control economic growth. The influence of inflation can be solved by rising BI rate and maintenance value of currency. Central Bank gives an explanation if they ready to support government policy on rising inflation, but they still wait for further affect on currency exchange in the market while some European countries in slowing economic growth due to dramatic depreciation in their currencies.

Frequent adjectives and typical combinations with nouns...I need more, please ;)

I need someone to help me to add other typical combinations between adjectives and nouns

 

1. Apparent discrepancy 

2. Potential problem

3. Principal cause

4. Rigorous methodology

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Which one better in formal writing, A or B

1.

A. Erikson's theory explains the fluctuations in the figures for this period

B. Erikson's theory provides an explanation of the fluctuations in the figures for this period.

 

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A. Cheng's theory emphasises the importance of extensive reading in language acquisition

B. Cheng's theory puts emphasis on the importance of extensive reading in language acquisition.

 

 

Please help me to assess what my weaknesses in writing ;) Today’s world technology holds an inevitable role in all aspects of human life. It can support many activities, such as invention of plane to reach far destination in a short time, and modern machine to produce mass electronic products, including internet to support communication and information exchange. Generally, internet provides information for everyone who needs to find a lot of information. Up to now, internet is still the best means for searching kinds of information. To begin with, internet cannot be separated from human’s activities. All sectors use internet to complete their tasks. A corporation needs it for promoting their products and services as well as their profile to attract the consumer. Website becomes an important identity of corporate or organization to shows transparency and credibility. Furthermore, internet is used by students to explore detail information to finish their homework or assignments. Indeed, internet is very helpful for final grade students in university to complete their final paper such as searching for supporting data and information. They just need a very short time to search for information with very low cost, compared to doing an interview or collecting data in the field. Although, internet provides a lot of information, the user must be smart to choose an important data. The user must also care about intellectual property right and be aware of plagiarism. To sum up, in my view, I agree that internet is the best means for looking for kind of information. People will be more competitive if possessing knowledge, enlarging social network. Internet provides most of them.

My sample writing for IELTS test Everyone, please help me to correct this. Appreciation for you all for kindness. Today’s world consists of developed and developing countries, both have different Gross Domestic Product as well as government’s budget on infrastructure, education and health care. Developed countries often inject some loans to the poorer nations to support their development, in order to create more job opportunities as well as build infrastructure to endorse economic growth. So far, I agree if industrialized countries should help the poorer countries to reduce poverty and improve quality of life’s standard. To begin with, most people from developing countries have low level of education and fewer facilities. Teachers in those countries earn low salary because of the low budget. Therefore, not many people are motivated to be a teacher. As a result, education system produces human resources who are lack of skill, knowledge and wills compared to the other countries. It becomes vicious cycle which impact to low productivity in producing economic values. For example, if the farmers know advance knowledge such as how to multiply harvest of fruits, they can produce more and get abundant revenue. On the other hand, farmers who have limited in knowledge will use conventional method, so, they don’t get significant result. Furthermore, a limit of infrastructure will cause a high cost of economy; therefore the country is less competitive compared with others. To sum up, I agree with the idea that the richer nations should assist the poorer with various kind of aid. Helping them to carry off their enormous problems means creating the world more peaceful and more restful to live in.