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FESTIVALS IN MY COUNTRY
In my country there are a lot of festivals. Most of them are done in summer. You can find different styles of music in each festival. Nowadays, is fashionable indie music.
Lots of festivals are of this style of music because young people like to listen to it. The most famous festivals are performed every year more or less on the same date. Also, another style of music is Pop/Rock or Reggae. But these festivals aren´t performed so often such as indie´s festivals. Pop/rock or reggae festivals only are performed one time in a year. But when they are done they are full of people. People who likes this style of music are older than people who usually goes indie´s festival.
I like very much go to different festivals because they are very fun. There is you can meet much people of different countries and you can speak english there with them.
In music festivals you can find different stages and you can enjoy of music group that you like more. it's fabulous because festivals are performed outdoors and in Spain we have many sunny days even in winter.
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British workers lose 24 minutes a day getting tea and coffee.
Workers need a break during their hard workday. And when they are going to take a coffe or tea I think it´s a good time for them to relaxing and talking with other people. The brain needs rest and recover to continue working. Tea or coffee contain stimulants substances and these ones help workers to feel better in their work. They combating better their fatigue. Workers are feeling more energetics, not feel sleepy, and perform better in their tasks. After coffe break people are more communicative and they usually to have better ideas. Also I think, theses substances can´t be an addiction. It´s not necessari to take coffe or tea all days only days when you are more tired. In days that you feel better you can take a juice, herbal infusions or another drink. However, having some time off at work is necessary for your brain, you should have a break at least twenty minutes.
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MY PET
I love animals. When I was child I carried homeless dogs and cats at my house. My mother was angry with me because she didn´t want animals in her house. But now, I have my own house and I can have a pet. My pet is a dog whose name is Nora, is a shar pei. She is very friendly with people and she likes playing with the tennis ball.
When she wants go out, she puts the tennis ball in your hand. This means what it´s time to go out. She loves running and jumping while she is playing with the ball.
She wants you throw the ball very very very far, so, she starts running very very fast, as fast as a lightning. After that, she comes back where you are and she gives you the tennis ball. Then, she wants to throw it very far again, and again and again more. She never is tired. You can play with her all day and sure you get tyred before than she.
Nora is my lovely pet and my favouritte toy.
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MY LAST SATURDAY
I went to Valencia city around 1:00 p.m. and I walked through downtown . Valencia it´s a nice city and her historic center it´s very nice. You can walk around of cathedral and you can visit diferents old churches. Also Valencia has several parcs where you can practice different sports, such as running, football, cycling and roller-skate.
After a walk I went to lunch in a restaurant. I ate paella´s dish, but in that restaurant not cooked very well, I had taste of better.
In the evening I went to visit Moma´s museum. It´s an art and historic museum. It was really funny because there was an exposition about over time. And it was represented by diferent people who was wearing diferent costumes. They explained to me about diferents decades and historic moments. After that, I come back to my house to get some rest and sleep in my bed.
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MY TRAVELS
I love traveling. It´s my drug.
All years, when I have holidays I usually travel around the world. I love meeting different people and interesting places.
My favorite destination is that which you can´t find many tourist. Because when people who live there see you they will treated you specially.
I have done a lot of trips around the world, but my favorite continent is Asia. I think because is more different than the others continents. Asia has gorgeous places and people is very kindly and friendly. However, I still haven´t been in Africa, and I would like to visit the south area in this continent.
I believe my next travel could be south American. I think there will be incredible places to visit there.
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Hello, my name is Clara. I would like to improve my english and I think to writte draftings it´s a good option.
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ABOUT MYSELF
My name is Clara. I´m 34 years old. I´m Spanish and I´m teacher.
I consider myself a person optimistic, enthusiastic , responsible and funny.
In my free time I like to practise diferents sports, paddle and rollerskates. Also, I like to read a good book and learning others languages. I love traveling and meet people of diferents countries.
I like music, I have a guitar and I love play it and sing with my friends while we are taking one or two beers.
I like very much smile and meet funny people.
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