Japanese to English translation 家に入居できるようになる日に来日でいかがでしょうか。 Does it mean: "Why don't I come to Japan on the day that I would be able to move into the house"?

Japanese to English translation Please help translate the following sentence. 空き部屋が確認でき次第見積もりをもらい契約に入り、 ジョンさんに金額と来日予定日を決めてもらいます。 Supposing I'm John, is this sentence directed to John? I'm a little bit confused on the "ジョンさんに" and the "決めてもらいます" part. From what I understand he seems to want to know more about John's finance and when he is coming to Japan. Does he want John to give him these information or does he plan on asking John at a later date? Thanks.

I need help translating this in to English How can I translate this to English? 来日前に日程に合わせホテルなどをご予約いただく、 7~8万円程の立替になりますが、マンスリーマンションをこちらで手配を行う、というのがよろしいと思います。 Thanks.

"I will keep you informed" in formal Japanese How can I say "I will keep you informed" in formal Japanese. Is this right? ご進捗状況を逐次知らせます。 Any other suggestions are welcomed. Thanks.

How can I write this sentence in keigo using ようです。 I have a slight problem using ようです together with verbs. How can I write this sentence correctly? It seems like the result isn't out yet. 結果はまだ出ではありませんようです。 Is it correct? Thanks

How can I use 下さる / いただく in these sentences? I want to thank someone for checking on the progress of my application. Are the following sentences correct? 申請を確認して下さって、ありがとうございます。 申請を確認していただき、ありがとうございます。 申請を確認していただいて、ありがとうございます。 Thank you for checking on the progress of my application. Is there a better way to phrase it? Also which form is better for politeness: 下さる or いただく? Thanks.