please correct my essay! How Can You Gain New Cross-cultural Skills, Sensitivity, and Awareness While Studying Abroad? Many students in my university want to study abroad, and some of them say the purpose is to gain new cross-cultural skills, sensitivity, and awareness, so I’m going to describe how to understand other culture. First way to understand other country’s culture is that to check the country’s culture in advance and understand the background. For example, almost everyone has smartphone, so it’s easy to check a lot of thing whenever and wherever on the Internet, and there are a variety of students’ experience and stories of the people who live there. That’s why, you can learn many things through reading these texts. When you get some information from websites, you can learn the background, as well. For example, even if there are some things that you can’t accept at first glance, you will be able to understand to some extent after you realize the background. Because of the investigation about the culture and background, you can prevent accidents concerning misunderstanding and ignorance. Second, when you study abroad and face troubles which you can’t accept, you shouldn’t put up with the hardship and ask the reason. No matter how much you investigate about other country, it’s quite difficult to know everything about the country, so it’s natural that you face troubles in foreign country. For example, when you study abroad, you might have a trouble about communication. In Japan, everyone guess each other, so it’s common that there is a big gap between what you said and what you really mean. On the contrary, most of foreign people say what they really think directly. That means that Japanese can’t convey what they want to say and foreign people can’t understand it because they aren’t used to guess what other people really want to say. At that time, if you apologize and blame yourself, you will be depressed and the experience makes you not want to communicate with foreign people. In order not to feel so, you shouldn’t endure the hardship. Not only that, you should consider the reason why foreign people don’t understand you and what you should do. For instance, if you feel foreign people don’t understand you or they say what they want to say too directly, you should ask the reason or try to find the answer. When you realize the reason or find the answer, you will be able to live a better life.

please correct my essay! Do You Prefer to Live with A Host Family or Campus Dormitory? Students in my university study abroad every year. When I study abroad, I will choose live with a host family or campus dormitory. In my case, I prefer to live a campus dormitory, and there are two reasons. First, campus dormitory is near or in the university, so I can save time. According to a senior student at the same club, his university had a large amount of homework, so people who live far from the university had a hard time because they don’t have time to complete homework, but he lived in a university dormitory, so he spent only four or five minutes to go to a classroom. Not only studying, when it comes to hanging out with friends, living a dormitory has an advantage. For example, when I want to hang out with friends, it takes long time if I live with a host family. On the contrary, if I live a dormitory, there are lots of friends, so it is easy to go out with them. That’s why, living a dormitory can utilize the time. Second, if I live a dormitory, I can make friend and join a party easily. For instance, one of the most common troubles at studying abroad is making friend. When you study abroad, you usually go foreign country alone, so there is no acquaintance at first. At that time, if you have a roommate and you can make friend soon, you will be able to make more new friends soon. In addition, if you live with a host family, there is no friend, so it takes longer time to make friend. According to my brother, there is a lot of parties in foreign country especially on weekends. Then, I can participate in the party whenever I want to do so and I don’t have to care about curfew. However, if I live with a host family, I shouldn’t be too late because when I’m too late, I have no choice but make a member of host family get up to unlock the door or stay out until the family get up. Moreover, when the party is held at dormitory but I live with a host family, I have to pay attention not to be involved in an accident on the way to home and event venue. Therefore, living a dormitory can develop your friendship. In conclusion, I prefer to live a dormitory because I can save money and I can make friend soon. That means I can utilize the time and enjoy my studying abroad life.

Plesse correct my essay! Do Not Give Money to Poor People It is said the gap between rich and poor is increasing. So even though poor country’s people try hard to earn money, they aren’t always able to get enough money. Moreover, poor people who don’t have opportunities to go to school can’t get a job. Even so, I firmly believe you shouldn’t money to poor people who beg me for money. Therefore, I’ll describe why you shouldn’t give money and what to do when you want to support poor people. First reason is that dishonest adults exploit children as a good resource of funds. When you go to developing country, lots of children ask us for giving money. Then, we shouldn’t give any money because after giving money, most of children have to present the money to adults. Moreover, because children beg money to tourists, they can’t go to school. Because they can’t go to school, they remain poor and the country remain poor too. It is negative chain. So, in order to save poor people, we shouldn’t give money to them. Once we give money to poor people, they too much depend on us. They do not always have a chance to be supported by someone, so it’s imperative to have a passion to get over a difficulty. If developed countries always support them, they might cease trying to get a job or solve problems on their own. In addition, when someone or some countries can support them, it’s not thorough solution but temporary solution. The reason is that they only get money and they don’t make money. That mean if they need money again, they have no choice to depend other country. That’s why, we shouldn’t give money to support developing country’s development. Finally, if you want to developing country’s people, you should give money to UNICEF or such institution. It’s difficult for most people to donate large amount of money, but it’s easy to do 1 dollar. Of course, 1 dollar is not much enough to build a school or help many people. However, when a lot of people give 1 dollar, many people would be able to survive. Not only that, when we give money to an institution, it’s unlikely that adults exploit money from children. It means children have a chance to go to school and they can study a lot. When a lot of people in developing countries have a plenty of education opportunities and can get a good job, they can make a lot of money and they don’t have to developing countries any more.

Please correct my essay! 2 Chinese table manner and Japanese one is difficult too. When you eat Chinese food, you shouldn’t eat all amount of the food because sometimes eating all food means the amount of the cuisine was too small amount and you are not satisfied with the food. However, if possible, you shouldn’t leave some food when you eat Japanese food. By nature, it was considered that eating food is the important thing to survive, so still now, eating all food is crucial manner. Having said that, these days, more and more Chinese people and tourists who go to China think that people shouldn’t leave some foods, hence some restaurants allow guests to carry the rest back to their house but in japan, usually it’s prohibited to do so because Japanese climate is high temperature and high humidity, so foods easy to go bad. To sum up, Japan and China lie in the same Asian area, but cuisine is completely different.

Please correct my essay! 1 Comparison of Japanese Cuisine and Chinese Cuisine Recently, our society has been a global society and lots of foreign people visit Japan. Especially, more and more Chinese people come here because of a low exchange rate of yen, and there are plenty of opportunities to eat Japanese and Chinese food. So today, I am going to compare Japanese cuisine and Chinese one. As for health aspect, Japanese cuisine tend to healthier than Chinese one because Chinese tend to use oil to cook something. One of the reasons is that Japan is an island country, but china is a continental country. It means Japanese have a great deal of water and the water was soft water, therefore, Japanese used water to make something frequently. On the contrary, Chinese water was hard water, so it wasn’t suit to cook something. That’s way Chinese people use more oil than Japanese. In addition, there is another reason of using oil. Japanese traditional cuisine was vegetarian cuisine, so called Syojin-Ryori, and Japanese weather is suitable for making vegetable, so there is plenty of fresh vegetable. However, China is much larger than japan and some Chinese areas are interior, and some are unfit to make crops, so it would be difficult to eat fresh food and there was a danger of a food poisoning. Hence, Chinese people use much oil. Regarding the appearance, Chinese people use big dishes for the group and Japanese use small and individual dishes. It is said there is a reason why Chinese people use big dishes. Since a long time ago, China had a lot of wars, so it was difficult to prove who is a fellow and who is an enemy. Thus, people eat foods from same big dishes and they conformed each other that they aren’t enemy. Moreover people used same big dishes in order not to be poisoned be someone. On the contrary, Japan has had a strong governing institution, so people didn’t have to care about fellow and enemy. Therefore, Japanese people didn’t have to use big dishes.

please correct my essay! Which Is the Worst Sport for Children to Play? Many people are attracted to charms of skateboarding. Especially a part of young people like skateboarding clothing. It is true that the people who enjoy it say that they feel breeze in whole body in playing it, while lots of people complain to skateboarding people. So, I will introduce that skateboarding has negative influence to everyone in terms of shock absorption, difficulty to manipulate, and ground condition. To begin with, when people skateboarding, it produces uncomfortable and noisy sound. Most of skateboard’s whiles are made by plastics, so there is no shock-absorbing material. It means that impact from a ground leads to whiles directly. Moreover, because of the lack of shock absorption, it is dangerous when a road is uneven. When you ride on a bike, it is not so important problem because rubber ease the impulse from ground, yet as for skateboarding, that is not going to happen. The more the road is rough, the more difficult to play skateboarding. Due to lack of shock absorption, some problems have happened. Secondly, it is very difficult to manipulate a skateboard. If you don’t put on protector and slip, you might hit your head, break a bone, or injure your body. Not only that, you might attack to other people in falling or when you can’t stop. If you cause an accident, in addition to hurt other person, perhaps you have to pay a huge amount of money. And if can drive zig zag, you will feel comfortable. On the other hand, people around you feel uncomfortable and may be irritated. Last but not least, skateboarding will make the ground rough. When you play it on a concrete ground, the ground is not scratched. However, dirt is much easier to be rough because compare to concrete, dirt is very soft. As well as dirt, skateboarding will damage plants in playing a park or dirt road. Skateboarders ought not to forget that when plants and dirt are damaged, municipalities spend tax to repair these things. By the way, due to such people who don’t have good public manners, more and more parks forbid to play skateboarding. As long as skateboarders play in safe areas with protectors, it is not so dangerous sports. Yet they have to remember that it has a negative points and a risk of bothering other people. When you do somewhere, you should use a bicycle, a car, or other transportations.

I'm glad if you correct my essay I am going to introduce the advantages and disadvantages of a smartphone. These days, more and more people have a smartphone because it has good points. Firstly, there are numerous useful applications, so it can be helpful machine people go to unknown places or work out. It guides us to the destination and count how many times people do it. Secondly, smartphone’s screen tends to bigger than traditional cellphone, so not only young people but also elderly or presbyopic people. If you want to see overall picture, you can reduce it. On the contrary, when you feel that the text or figure is too small, you can enlarge it. It means that smartphone is freely adjustable according to the purpose of use. Finally, people can choose favorite cover from a number of options. There are cute, cool, law price, expensive and tough covers, so people can select the best cover. However, people mustn’t forget that smartphone has serious problems. The most serious problem is that smartphone may cause light pollution. Its light is too bright especially at night, so we will be bothered to sleep and someone suffer from insomnia. Not only that, some people spend too much time to use it. It can be lessen our communication with others. Moreover, now that it is too much be prevailed especially young people, therefore, some people are addicted to a smartphone and cannot live without it. To sum up, it is true that a smartphone has good points, but we should not use too often.

Please correct my summary The main character quit school when she was 14-year-old. Then, she went to America alone to battle her eating disorder. After she went to America for six months, she came back to Japan and completed high school by studying at home. At school, the teacher gives students a grade. But she didn’t go to high school, so she depended on her tutors. They didn’t compare her with other students and give her an objective evaluation. she is 19-year-old now and the disorder doesn’t affect her. Through a home schooling, she learned how to manage her time and gained a hunger to learn. So she could manage to use to lectures and exams at her university. She plans to study phycology and she’d like to support patients who have mental disorder.

Is this fine? When I chatted with a friend, he mistyped. Then, what should I have said? I typed "cheat→chat, right?" and he understood me. But I'd like to know natural expression.