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Rationale for the choice of theme for thesis Please, correct this text for thesis introduction. Thank you! Today I would like to tell you about my scientific researches. I joined the faculty of the University of Information and Telecommunications Systems and Technology at Belgorod State University in 2017. My major is theoretical foundations of computer science. This specialty is related to information technology that helps to achieve high results and realize their goals. My research activities are focused on the examination of the decision support systems (DSS). DSS is computer-based automated system which helps people to make decisions in difficult situation and various fields. I’m going to develop DSS for medicine in my thesis. DSS in health information system (HIS) are used to assist managers and head of business in making decisions based on the analysis of a large amount of statistical information. For example, it would be help with creating working arrangements, outlining perspective development paths or warning of a possible shortage of specialist connected to high workload or seasonal outbreaks of disease. Medical decisions can be characterized by a lack of knowledge, limited time resources, the inability to attract competent experts, and incomplete information about the patient's condition. These factors are the causes of medical errors, which can lead to further loss of patient health. Therefore, the topic of my research is relevant today. In this study, I work under the guidance of Professor Zhilyakov Evgeny Georgievich, who is the head of the department of information and communication technologies and systems. The topic for thesis was selected consciously. I’ve already worked for «SoftTrust» company for 2 years. The company develops software for a health information system. I’m QA engineer and this topic of my thesis is good opportunity to expand my knowledge in the automation of medicine and applying my research in practice.
19 juni 2020
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One of my favorite TV shows Hi! I'm going to talk about my favorite TV show in my language school. Please, help me to correct this speech. Today I would like to talk about one of my favorite TV shows. «Dark» by Netflix is the most gripping, most shocking and most amazing time-travel story I have ever seen. The story starts simply enough. In the small German town of Winden, the disappearance of a child remind about similar incident 33 years before. There are four main families with their own secrets. At the centre of it all is a mysterious cave, a nuclear power plant, and a time-traveller who brings more questions than answers. Anyway, it is not a trivial sci-fi story. It’s just brilliant drama about family ties, and their effect on the past and future. Time travel often comes with conflicting alternative storylines and people's actions not making any sense. Dark is magical, but this magic isn't in altering the past. Instead, the real mysteries are all in the present, and people's backstories are crucial in understanding the main idea. Each character is special, all conversation and action is carefully considered in the general plot. This story looks like truly believable because this scriptwriting makes sense. When people have information that another should know for safety, they tell one another. Mothers know something dark about their husband? They tells her kids. Police officer works without departmental approval? He inform his colleagues. The music, cinematography and historical clothing is amazing and quality. The acting of this German cast is phenomenal and impressive. Every character’s story is unique and remarkable! My personal favourite is a person of a thorny destiny – Mikkel. And I really admire Ulrich. This show debuted three years ago, and I was really impressed with the first episodes. The first season was incredible. It’s like a stimulant to the brain. However, you should try note every character's name on a paper.. First time it will be hard to remember all name and family ties. The final season arrives in 2020, and I can’t wait.
17 mei 2020
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An opinion essay about media The world isn’t run by force anymore. These days information is the most dangerous weapon. Generally, the media is working for the benefit of the society. But it’s not secret that some of the mass media are owned by the biggest corporation. That’s why news usually focuses more on the lives of famous people. It’s just a fact that we are always keen on something unusual. That’s human nature. People are following their dreams, but their dreams are born under the influence of modern culture. I don’t mind that media is focused on the lives of famous people, if this people achieved fame on their own. These stories are inspiring. And there are people that derive inspiration from success stories. From the other side mass media plays a fundamental role in society like culture driver. Children grow up and adapt to the modern trends. What should they do if they would know only celebrity’s experience? If children tend to adapt, adults tend to compare. How many people will feel highly unsatisfied if their life is different from TV? I’m sure, we need more ordinary people in mass media. It would help to understand, that we are different in. It would help to be happier. Anyway, balance is particularly important. Without a doubt, mass media has great benefits and could be a driver for development. But at the same time it’s responsible for mental health of the humanity. Please, be careful and think critically!
18 april 2020
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A little bit about my job Please, correct me! I have a master's degree in construction management and civil engineering. After University I've been looking for a job for a long time. It took me about 3 months, but I found out. Now I work as an civil engineer for a construction company. Usually I prepare specifications and draft tender documents. I analyze range plans, survey reports and design projects. Sometimes I prepare cost estimates for materials, equipment, or labor to determine a project's economic feasibility. I have a full-time job. Usually I work nine-to-six. I have time for relax. When my boss leave the office, I can take time off of work, for example for taking coffee away or buying shokolad. If I'm ill, I can take some sickdays. My cheef doesn't mind it. But he is workaholick.. He spends a lot of time at work every day. So, I think that he doesn't like staying home. I dont't like working overtime. I prefer to take work home, because I have better working conditions here. When I meet deadlines, I'll be a lot of pressure at work. Sometimes it is usefull because I can work quickly. I like my job, but sometimes I think "Should I quit my job?" I like the office and collegues but there is too small salary. It's sad.
11 oktober 2018
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Who is this man? Hi! I wrote here a lot of facts about popular man. I prepared it for english class. Please, corret me. If you know who is it, write here. Thank you! 1. This man is popular English actor, musician, comedian and writer. 2. He was born in Oxford into a Scottish familie. 3. He has a bachelor's degree in antropology and archeology. 4. He sings, plays piano, guitar, drums, harmonical and saxophone. 5. He is vocalist and keyboard player for the charity rock group which includes the actors of the different TV series. 6. He prefers mostly motorcycles. 7. He has a great filmography but I like the doctor-misanthrope and his american accent.
25 september 2018
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How I got lost My first travel was in Germany. I have had the long plane's time. I prepare the documents, for example students visa for works, contract, different documents for the embassy... It's took me about three monts. I studied german for a long time because I had to work with clients. I studied special words about restaurant, food, kitchen. I didn't chose work place, didn't search hotel or room because I have had distribution in the workplace. Fortunately my employer gave me room. It cost about 200 euros per monts. This room was near to works. I bought ticket and waited departure. I allways fear to lose bagadge or passport. I feared to lose in Istambul airport because I knew german, but didn't know English. In Germany I lost twice. Firstly I lost in Stuttgart railway station. I didn't know where was my train. Than I lost in Heilbronn city. I didn't know where is bus station and how I can go to the worksplace. I was very tired and nervous. I even thought of going on foot, although it would take more than 4 hours! But an old woman helped me.. She didn't know where is the bus too, but she asked other driver and explained to me. I found the bus, arrived to Ilsfeld and bought water in the market. The sun was shone like in a song of Rammstein. I walked across the feld for another two kilometers. Thanks, google maps! I came to work, but my adwentures were just beginning... It was very difficult and stressful day.. But this memories make me happy. Anyway.
2 april 2018
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Walking tour of the city Please correct me. Thanks! Today we go to the historic center of the city. We visit city center of Belgorod. Here we look Shchepkin Theater. It is a popular place for cultural recreation. Here show interesting perfomances, for example "Hamlet", "Forget the Gerostrat", "Classmates" "Cherry Garden" and others. Next we go down the street to the Victory park. This place is ecpecially beautiful in autumn. The Park is near the river Veselka. We go through the park and see the museum of Diorama. It is a big military museum about the history of the war. For the museum is the most interesting exposition of military transport. Nearby there is an art museun and museum and museum of traditional culture. In this area use many tourists. They visit museum, walk and make photos. Later we go along the river to the state university. We cross the bridge and go past the fountans and monuments. Here is the sport complex of Svetlana Khorkina. She is a famous russian gumnast, who has many sports awards in international competitions. After that we go along the Bogdan Khmelnitsky avenue to the stadium "Energomash". This is the name of the football team of Belgorod. We turn right and go along the Narodny boulevard. There is a central market. shops and shopping centers. Then we go down to the Philarmonic. This is a beautiful building, where concerts of jazz and classic music are held. Especially popular are organ music concerts from the famous musician Timur Galliulin.
2 april 2018
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German foods What do you think about German food? When I visit other countries, I am always interested in three things: - people with their national culture; - architecture; - food. When I worked in Germany, I tried new German dishes every day. German food is delicious and hearty. It include a lot of meat, vegetables and bread. Breakfast usually consists of bread or toast with fruit jam or honey, eggs, ham or salted meats, cheeses and strong coffee or tea. Children drinks milk, juce or cocoa. A typical lunch consist various soup, side dish, meat and vegetables. For example the most popular dishes is potato salad with sausage or meat balls, Schnitzel with grilled vegetables, sausages, pork and chiken, fish sticks, croquettes... Vegetables are also popular ecpecially cabbage, green beans, peas and carrots. Usually dinner is the smallest meal. It consists of whole grain bread, cheeses, deli meats and sausages, fresh vegetables(as pickles). Many peoples drink beer or wine. The selection of desserts in Germany is also great. In many bakeries you can buy traditional pretzels, rolls, gingerbread, pies and cakes. There are a lot of kind of chocolate and sweets. I think that this food is not good for me, because usually it is fat and not good for health and a slim body. Unfortunately. But I like German food, ecpecially sweets and chocolates =)
28 maart 2018
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