IELTS Task 1 The survey gives the information of the opinion about the city sports club from club's members. Overall, most members were satisfied at the city sports club, especially in aspect of club facilities. Female and Male members were accounted almost equal percentage (around 64%) in this part. As for opening hours, there were 72% of female members were very satisfied with, whereas male members were relatively ow, only 44% of them. Besides this, 37% of men conveyed they were not satisfied with the time they could access the gym. The part which needs to be improved urgently for female members was the range of activities. 30% of them were not satisfied and the figure was 10 times more than the figure of opening hours which women was not satisfied with. In conclusion, extending the opening hours and taking place more activities for women ma attract more customers and solve the problems.

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Practice Test for IELTS The picture demonstrates that the amount of energy produced and consumed by people live in the US from 1950 to 2000, and projecting it in the year of 2025. Overall, the consumption and production of energy has significantly increased in the past and it is expected to continually rise in the future. American only needed less than 40 quadrillion of BTU's in 1950 while the need became two times more in 2000 (almost 100 quadrillion of BTU's), and may reach a peak of 150 quadrillion of BTU's in 2025. Although there were some fluctuation in the period of 1975 and 2000, it rose steadily. In the other hand, the production of energy was relatively lower than the consumption in the US. Although the amount of them were not equal, the figure of them were near between 1950 and 1975. However, the gap between them increased after 1975 and is predicted to become more larger in the future.

日本語の問題 日本語の問題があります！ 1.誰がどんなに疑おうと “疑おうと”は何の意味ですか 辞書形は何ですか 疑おうと是什麼意思呢？ 辭書形是什麼呢？怎麼變得呀？ 2.背負わされるはとい意味ですか 辞書形は何ですか 背負わされる是什麼意思呢？ 辭書形是什麼呢 3.”捨てられずに”で、ずにの意味は何ですか 捨てられずに中，ずに的意思是什麼呢？ ありがとうございます[emoji] 謝謝大家[emoji] the English version 1. What is the meaning of 疑おうと What is its 辞書形? How does it transform? 2. What is the meaning of 背負わされる? What is its 辞書形? 3. What is the meaning of ずに in 捨てられずに? Thank you so much [emoji] 我日文還在初級階段，錯很多的話請見諒

日本語の勉強を始める 私は日本語を勉強したけど、あまり使わなくて、英語を勉強したから、今たいてい忘れる。先先週は英語のテストが終わった、そして家族は國を帰った、今は時間がたくさんあるから、日本語の勉強ができる。日本語のパートナーが欲しい。 家族は１０日オーストラリアへ旅行に来た、色々な場所へ行った。カンガルーとコアラとクジラを見た。家族はカンガルーを見たことがないんだ、とても嬉しかった。 チケットは高かったんだ、アイーベンチャーカードを買った。このカードは場所が３つを選べから、クジラを見ると蟹を捕リと動物園へ行った。クジラは大きかった、そして、ここのと台湾のは全然違う。 家族はおとといに帰った、今は台湾にいる。私はまだオーストラリアにいる。今日はテストの点数がもらうから、ビクビクしている。

家族のオーストラリアの旅行 先週から、家族はオーストラリアへ遊んで来た。色々な場所へ行った。コアラとカンガルーを見て行ってあげた。家族はカンガルーを見たことがないから、嬉しかった！母はカンガルーは鼠見たい、気持ち悪いと言ったが、私は可愛いと思った。

Last writing task Some parents are blamed for letting their children become selfish because they fulfill the expectation of their children. The parents believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. People can see that some children are crying in a toy store for the toy which they really want. Some parents will buy for them. Children may consider that they can cry or be noisy to receive the stuff which they want. This may result in a selfish person or a greedy person. Some children are overweight and not healthy because they choose the food which they like and refuse to eat those they are not interested in. Their parents allow them to make their own choices and it leads to native effect on them. However, making own decisions may help children to understand the importance of it, they may think more before they decide their choices. If children are not satisfied the consequence, they will know they should think twice before making decisions and they will understand that they should take the responsibility, because they are the people who made the decisions. Making own decisions may have a positive effect on children. Parents should not over protect their children. They should let their children make their own choices, but not every time. Children should learn to think twice and understand they should take the responsibility of the result. I believe that this process is important to children.

Last writing task 1 The mechanism of producing electricity by geothermal energy is shown in a picture. There are 4 steps to produce electricity. It needs cold water, the geothermal zone (which provide the heat), the condenser, the turbine and the generator. First of all, cold water is pumped down in order to reach the geothermal zone which is located under the ground about 4.5 km. The temperature of cold water in the pipe start to rise by the heat from the geothermal zone where is full of hot rocks. After the cold water became hot water, it is pumped up and collected by condenser and than transform into steam. Steam will cause the turbine rotates in order to activate generator to produce electricity. This method will not produce any waste or cause any pollution. However, the limitation is the lack of geothermal zone, because it appears only in certain areas.

12 5 1 The report which is about the Australia doing regular exercise in 2010. It was divided in the different age group and gender. Overall, women were more enjoy in exercise than men in most of age groups. However, in the 15 to 24 group, men with regular exercise were more than women (52.8 percent in men and 47.7 percent in women). 2 gender in the 65 and over group were almost in same percentage. The most percentage of women doing regular exercise was in the 45 to 54 group, for the men was in the 15 to 24 group. The percentage of men decreased to 39.5 percent from the 15 to 24 group to the 35 to 44 group, then it increased to 46.7 in the 65 and over group. Maybe men are more concern about health than before since they are 45 years old.