Would you please proofread my introduction about an ice cream ?
Second, I introduce the charm of Yukimi Daifuku. This is the ice cream wrapped in mochi. One pack always contains two daifukus for this product. According to the homepage of the Yukimi daifuku, in 1981, Yukimi daifuku was developed to be eaten by cotatsu by the Lotte company, and it was big hit. Until that time, ice cream is something to eat in summer. But Yukimi daifuku changed this common knowledge. By the appearance of yukimi daifuku, ice cream sales higher and higher in winter. This ice cream has been mainly sold vanilla flavor since on sale. Of course as you may already know , limited edition flavor is sold every year. But my favorite flavor is vanilla.
In this presentation, I have talked about my favorite ice creams. They are very delicious. If you got interested in Yawamochi and Yukimi Daifuku, please eat them. Besides, if you have your favorite ice cream, please tell me. Thank you for listening.
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