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Corect please Internet Effects on our life 
As we all know after discovering internet human’s life changed, our social life expands our area of contact increased from a small village or city to worldwide and bring us a virtual life. So internet discovered and entered in to every individual life’s. But it effected human life positively and negatively.
At start, we focus on positive effects: Internet makes easier to transfer data from one place to another place moreover it bring capability of video call which is beneficial in scientific parts and individual lives. In addition to this internet makes easier to access data from every academic area and lots of more benefits.
 In another hand internet has negative effects on human life, firstly it decreased our privacy security now by help of internet we can go to personal data of internet users very easily.
Second internet is addictive specially using social Medias and online games that keeps adults and young generation busy. Overuse of internet have bad effects spiritually a psychologically and make young generation lazy. 
Third internet decreased the time which parents and their kids need to spend with each other, internet brought office works at home, so parents are busy with their office works even if they are at home and children’s spend time in social media and online games.
In conclusion internet brought lots of changes in human life that some changes has negative effect and some of them has positive effects, but positive changes are much more then negative changes.

Please someone correct my Essay 😊 Internet Effects on our life 
As we all know after discovering internet human’s life changed, our social life expands our area of contact increased from a small village or city to worldwide and bring us a virtual life. So internet discovered and entered in to every individual life’s. But it effected human life positively and negatively.
At start, we focus on positive effects: Internet makes easier to transfer data from one place to another place moreover it bring capability of video call which is beneficial in scientific parts and individual lives. In addition to this internet makes easier to access data from every academic area and lots of more benefits.
 In another hand internet has negative effects on human life, firstly it decreased our privacy security now by help of internet we can go to personal data of internet users very easily.
Second internet is addictive specially using social Medias and online games that keeps adults and young generation busy. Overuse of internet have bad effects spiritually a psychologically and make young generation lazy. 
Third internet decreased the time which parents and their kids need to spend with each other, internet brought office works at home, so parents are busy with their office works even if they are at home and children’s spend time in social media and online games.
In conclusion internet brought lots of changes in human life that some changes has negative effect and some of them has positive effects, but positive changes are much more then negative changes.

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Being at home during this pandemic; has good effects or bad effects? As we all know covid-19 make social distances obligation for all over the world, this social distances has effected people very much in both positive and negative ways. First of all I want to discuss about positive effects of this phenomena. Positive effects which social distance made on peoples one of them is while it was making people far from each other’s actually it was making families closer, so families in this pandemic knows each other’s well and the pandemic caused that parents be with their children and give them more time and have fun with being together. Second this being at home causes decreasing pollutions in all over the world climate was changing and temperature was increasing in a very high speed before this pandemic but now it’s not increasing it remains in its normal condition. Negative effects which it has in all over the world mostly it affected poor people those who had a low income and had no saved resource to use it during this pandemic. To conclude it, being at home had good effects on people which are in medium and high class but for poor people its hard to be at home and enjoy the time.