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Please help me correct my writing🙏 Topic: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Dear Sir White, My name is Kazu. I have seen you look for someone who can look after your kid and I am really interested in the job. Living in Australia is actually one of my bucket lists and I have recently quit my job in my country so I am ready to move in Australia and take care of your child. I have worked with kids for six years in Japan and I like playing with kids. I am a clean outgoing person and up for something new. Living abroad may be difficult at first, but I want to push myself out of my comfort zone and experience things that I cannot try in my country. When I have free time, I’d love to do road trip from Adelaide to Perth hoping to see a lot of Australian native species such as wallabies, koalas and kangaroos. Thank you for reading this letter. I hope I hear from you very soon. Sincerely Kazu
25 września 2023
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Everyone strives to achieve a life full of happiness. However, it is hard to define what happiness is, just as the old saying goes—different strokes for different folks. But I believe there are a few key factors which are common to make people feel happy. There are many reasons for difficulties in the definition of happiness. On the one hand, gender and ethnic group differentials are more pronounced. It is not surprising that some movie scenes can touch most girls’ hearts while boys have no sense of that. At the same time, local romantic stories are easier to understand by the natives. On the other hand, with times changing, for most people who lived in the past, enough food may satisfy them fully, but in modern society, happiness varies according to the different social status. The happiness of the rich may come from gaining a higher reputation while the poor may feel content with streaming videos on the phone in a relaxed mood. Though the definition of happiness changes through different times and different individuals, some key factors are still common, such as an environment with love and care, friends who can talk to when running into troubles, and a society with fairness and righteousness. For example, you may lack food and suffer from hunger, but with someone who cares for you and listens to you, you may feel more satisfied than being isolated but with a stomach filled with rich food. Better is a dinner of herbs where love is, than a fatted calf with hatred. In conclusion, happiness derives from the positive understanding of inner parts. Different individuals have different insights. Though it is not easy to interpret it, it is still possible for us to bring others happiness by loving each other. AI gave me a scores of 7.5. Where could it be repolished and improved?🤔🤔
25 września 2023
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But he did not know what exactly had happened, until he read the feathered letter the next day, which was carried to him by a post rider through a non-stop delivery. The emperor prepared to withdraw from the capital and set a banquet on the tower. Noticing that people sitting around were all miserable, he asked singers to perform a piece of lyric. How could fortune and prosperity last forever? The Emperor said: “What a genius.” Soon he left the banquet without taking a drop of wine. The song is not only a eulogy dedicated to a falling empire, but also a testament to a piece of history that fire and smoke signal network was engaged and penetrated. And when later generations stand on top of a beacon tower, they were overwhelmed by the same reflection or a sense of melancholy. The moon rise above Western Garden remains the same.
25 września 2023
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