I believe there are multiple things that have my parents feel proud of me. In my eyes the best thing I've done is getting better marks at school. In the fifth grade I noticed my marks could be better.

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Jonas Naumann

I believe there are multiple things that have my parents feel proud of me. In my eyes the best thing I've done is getting better marks at school. In the fifth grade I noticed my marks could be better. They were okay but I knew I was able to improve. So I started figuring out why I was not using my full potential. I found out that the problem was my learning methods. Just learning facts off by heart was not fun and demotivating, because I forgot everything after the test. I then started to learn how to learn. I finished my school with the best marks in the class and even got the honor of getting in the local newspaper with other great students in my city. One other reason has also played a big role in getting better at school. I've started a new hobby. I found out that computers are insane and started to try to understand them and configuring them. I fixed phone issues, set up TVs, installed routers and did other technical stuff at friends of us. I then started to understand how I can program a computer and build web applications and other useful programs. This is the reason why I currently started my traineeship of an IT specialst for application development. But I believe I can also be proud of my parents, because they supported me in every way to get to there where I am now.

2 kwi 2023 08:17

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I believe there are multiple reasons why my parents are proud of me. In my opinion, the best thing I have done is to achieve better grades in school. In fifth grade, I noticed that my grades could be better, and I started to figure out why. I found that the problem was my learning methods, and I learned how to learn effectively. I finished school with the best grades in my class and even got featured in the local newspaper along with other outstanding students in my city. Another reason why I excelled in school was my interest in computers. I learned how to fix phone issues, set up TVs, installed routers and did other technical stuff for my friends. I started learning how to program a computer, build web applications, and other useful programs. This passion led me to pursue a traineeship as an IT specialist for application development. I am also proud of my parents because they supported me in every way to get where I am today.

The text is well-written and easy to understand. However, it could benefit from some additional detail and description to help the reader fully understand your achievements and the role your parents played in supporting you. Consider adding more specific examples of how your parents supported you in pursuing your interests and achieving your goals. Additionally, it would be helpful to elaborate more on your traineeship and how it is helping you to further develop your skills and achieve your career goals.

8 kwietnia 2023

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