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IELTS writing task1
#173
The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs below indicate the rate of employed male and female in three countries in 2005 and 2015.
Overall, the employed rates of male were higher than those of female in all the countries in both 2005 and 2015. The percentage of employment was higher in 2015 than in 2005 in both genders and in all the countries. All of them experienced the growth of female employment rates from 2005 to 2015.
Sweden had the highest employment ratio in both genders in 2005 compared to other countries. Its employment rate was nearly 80% for male workers and about 45% for female workers in 2005. Yet, Sweden’s percentage of male employment shrank to 70% in 2015 though the percentage of female employment showed slight growth to reach 50% in 2015. South Korea went through a slight improvement of employment rates in both genders. For male, it extended from 70% to just under 80%, for female from 30% to 35%. Canada achieved the largest positive change in the employment rates in both genders over the 10 years. For male, it reached 70% from 60%, for female to approximately 55% from slightly under 40%.
Practice example is from ielts-exam.net
31 gru 2020 13:01
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IELTS writing task1 #173 The bar charts below show the percentages of men and
women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant. The graphs below indicate the rate of employed male and female
in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Overall, the employed rates of male were
higher than those of female in all the countries in both 2005 and 2015. The
percentage of employment was higher in 2015 than in 2005 in both genders and in
all the countries. All of them experienced the growth of female employment rates
from 2005 to 2015. Sweden had the highest employment ratio in both genders in
2005 compared to other countries. Its employment rate was nearly 80% for male
workers and about 45% for female workers in 2005. Yet, Sweden’s percentage of
male employment shrank to 70% in 2015 though the percentage of female employment
showed slight growth to reach 50% in 2015. South Korea went through a slight
improvement of employment rates in both genders. For male, it extended from 70%
to just under 80%, for female from 30% to 35%. Canada achieved the largest
positive change in the employment rates in both genders over the 10 years. For
male, it reached 70% from 60%, for female to approximately 55% from slightly
under 40%. Practice example is from ielts-exam.net
The graphs below indicate the difference in employment rate between both genders
in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Overall, the employment rates of male employees were
higher than those of females for all countries in both 2005 and 2015. The employment rate was higher in 2015 than in 2005 for both genders and for
all countries. All of them experienced a growth of female employment rates from 2005 to 2015. Sweden had the highest employment ratio for both genders in
2005 compared to other countries. Its employment rate was nearly 80% for male workers and about 45% for female workers in 2005. Yet, Sweden’s percentage of
male employment shrank to 70% in 2015 while the percentage of female employment
showed slight growth and reached 50% in 2015. South Korea went through a slight improvement of employment rates for both genders. For males, it increased from 70%
to just under 80%, for females from 30% to 35%. Canada achieved the largest positive change in the employment rates for both genders over the 10 year period. For
males, it reached 70% from previously 60%, for females approximately 55% from slightly
under 40%.
31 grudnia 2020
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