Today is the first day of October. It is hard to believe that October has already arrived because it was still very hot until recently. However, the nights have gradually become cooler, and I can feel that autumn is getting closer. I am happy about this because I am not good at hot weather and I prefer cooler temperatures. I enjoy going outside when the weather is cool and comfortable. Also, I really like winter fashion, such as scarves, coats, sweaters, and boots. I think winter clothes are stylish and make me feel warm and cozy. For these reasons, I am looking forward to the coming of winter. I hope I can enjoy the cool autumn weather before winter arrives.
Szukaj różnych nauczycieli angielski...
Poprawki · 2
0
Today is the first day of October. It is hard to believe that October has
already arrived because it was still very hot until recently. However, the
nights have gradually become cooler, and I can feel that autumn is getting
closer. I am happy about this because I am not good in hot weather and I prefer
cooler temperatures. I enjoy going outside when the weather is cool and
comfortable. Also, I really like winter fashion, such as scarves, coats,
sweaters, and boots. I think winter clothes are stylish and make me feel warm
and cozy. For these reasons, I am looking forward to the coming of winter. I
hope I can enjoy the cool autumn weather before winter arrives.
0
I am not good at hot weather.
I am not good at handling hot weather..
the coming of winter
the arrival of winter
more natural is arrival not coming ..sound more natural
Chcesz robić postępy szybciej?
Dołącz do społeczności uczących się i wypróbuj darmowe ćwiczenia!
Nie przegap okazji, by nauczyć się języka w zaciszu własnego domu. Przejrzyj naszą ofertę doświadczonych korepetytorów i zapisz się na pierwszą lekcję już teraz!
Zacznij naukę już dziś
