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It was a lovely autumn evening in outskirts.
I was walking in our garden with my sisters to collect some cranberries to make jam. I forgot my shoes in the house,so legs were numb because of cold weather. It was foggy and kinda humid outside. Despite the frost, we were having much fun and after we finished our little assignment, we went back into our house and sat in kitchen. I took out the basin with hot water and lowered my feet into water. Only one little lightbulb was working and the atmosphere felt so lonely, but pleasing and peaceful.🌀
I took a photo of view in my room.
I attached the photo below.:)
16 wrz 2024 14:56
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It was a lovely autumn evening in the outskirts of the city
I was walking in our garden with my sisters to collect some cranberries to make jam. I had forgotten my shoes inside, so my legs were numb with cold. It was foggy and kind of humid outside. Despite the frost, we were having a lot of fun and after we finished our little assignment, we went back inside and sat in the kitchen. I took out the basin and filled it with hot water and lowered my feet into the water. Only one little lightbulb was working and the atmosphere felt so lonely, but pleasing and peaceful.🌀
I took a photo of the view from my room.
I attached the photo below.:)
18 września 2024
It was a lovely autumn evening in outskirts of town.
I was walking in our garden with my sisters to collect some cranberries to make jam. I forgot my shoes in the house, so my legs were numb from the cold weather. It was foggy and kind of humid outside. Despite the frost, we were having a lot of fun and after we finished our little assignment, we went back into our house and sat in kitchen. I took out the basin with hot water and lowered my feet into it. Only one little lightbulb was working and the atmosphere felt so solitary, but pleasing and peaceful.🌀
I took a photo of the view from my room.
I attached the photo below.:)
OUTSKIRTS generally needs to refer to a town. KINDA is very informal - I would only use for texting, etc. LONELY is negative, i.e. it doesn't mean being alone, it's being alone and feeling bad about it. Nice job. dang mosquitos!
17 września 2024
It was a lovely autumn evening in outskirts. I was walking in our garden with my
sisters to collect some cranberries to make jam. I forgot my shoes in the
house,so legs were numb because of cold weather. It was foggy and kinda humid
outside. Despite the frost, we were having much fun and after we finished our
little assignment, we went back into our house and sat in kitchen. I took out
the basin with hot water and lowered my feet into water. Only one little
lightbulb was working and the atmosphere felt so lonely, but pleasing and
peaceful.🌀 I took a photo of view in my room. I attached the photo below.:)
But mosquitos ruined everything>:(
16 września 2024
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