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Viviana
MY FIRST TRAVEL EXPERIENCE (ON A PLANE) PART 2
Anyway I've been daydreaming about this trip all the time until the day of our departure. When I saw the airplane we'd get into I was so baffled and astonished on how huge it was. I had never seen an airplane so closely. I was shocked!
You may think that I panicked once in the airplane, but no! I was so calm throughout the trip. The only thing that annoyed me was when the plane took off and my ears got closed. I also felt like something heavy was 'squashing' my body. It was insupportable and distressing! I also had to take the aisle seat because I'm scared of heights and I couldn't bear sitting next the window. It was overall an amazing experience.
I split the answer in half. If you're willing to correct me, please look for part 1 too. Thank you!
23 maj 2024 15:22
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MY FIRST TRAVEL EXPERIENCE (ON A PLANE) PART 2
Anyway I'd been daydreaming about this trip all the time until the day of our departure. When I saw the airplane we'd get into I was so baffled and astonished at/by how huge it was. I had never seen an airplane so closely. I was shocked!
You may think that I panicked once in the airplane, but no! I was so calm throughout the trip. The only thing that annoyed me was when the plane took off and my ears got closed. I also felt like something heavy was 'squashing' my body. It was difficult and distressing! I also had to take the aisle seat because I'm scared of heights and I couldn't bear sitting next to the window. Overall it was an amazing experience.
I split the answer in half. If you're willing to correct me, please look for part 1 too. Thank you!
Nice job!, most corrections were either minor, or dealing with difficult complex tenses..
24 maja 2024
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angielski, francuski, włoski, turecki
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