Short Tip: Use “souvenirs” (not capitalized) and connect short, related sentences for a smoother flow. Saying “brought back” sounds more natural than “bought” in this context. Advice on Natural Flow of English: Try linking sentences with “and” or “so” to avoid choppy rhythm. Also, include small details (like "spicy snacks" or "fun things") to make your writing sound more vivid and natural.

I envy Korean souvenirs!!

I’m glad your sister came back,your english is really good!! ( :