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When I saw weather news in this morning, it made me surprised!! Tomorrow's temparature will be 30 degrees! I was surprised by the forecast that the temperature would be like summer even though it was still May. I'm happy that summer is coming, but it's hard to hot💦
19 maj 2025 10:39
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When I saw the weather this morning, it surprised me!! Tomorrow's temperature will be 30 degrees! I was surprised, by the forecast, that the temperature would be like summer, even though it was still May. I'm happy that summer is coming, but it's way too hot💦
So, only thing I want to specifically mention: "By the forecast" in the middle of the sentence is a little strange, it's better to just delete it, especially because you already mentioned it in the previous sentence, so it's repetitive. Those are my thoughts, great job!
19 maja 2025
When I watched the weather forecast this morning, I was surprised!! Tomorrow's temperature will be 30 degrees! I was surprised to see that the temperature would be like in summer even though it is still May. I'm happy that summer is coming, but it's hard because it is too hot💦
19 maja 2025
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