Hello everyone! I'll have a meeting of FURISODE. FURISODE is Japanese tradition. When we become 20 years old, we will wear a FURISODE. So, we should prepare for it. ##Traditional --> Tradition, Traditional is used as an adjective (Traditional clothes) while Tradition is a Noun (eg, it's a tradition) ##when become --> when we become You must define the subject after you use when in this context (eg, when I went home) ##20 age --> 20 Years old, 20 age does not make sense so you must use [number] years old. (eg, 25 years old) #I am an aspiring English language teacher so please let me know if this helped you :)

Hello everyone! I'll have a meeting of FURISODE. A FURISODE is a traditional Japanese kimono. When we become 20 years of age, we will wear a FURISODE. So, we should prepare it.

Hello everyone! I'll have a meeting of FURISODE. FURISODE is Japanese traditional. When become 20 age, we will warm a FURISODE. So, we should prepare it.