Farhana Qureishi
Are these sentences grammatically correct and natural enough ✅ Maharana Bheem singh, a famous king of then ruled this area like a ferocious lion but today he is no more except his kingdom and wealth. This proves that power and influence is just a passing thing. Only your legacy remains. By the way, let me sit on this chair which he used to spend his time to feel myself like a king.
29 kwi 2024 22:45
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Are these sentences grammatically correct and natural enough ✅ Maharana Bheem singh, a famous king from then, ruled this area like a ferocious lion. But today he is no more, only his kingdom and wealth remain. This proves that power and influence is just a passing thing. Only your legacy remains. By the way, let me sit on this chair which he used to spend his time to feel like a king myself.
Not too bad overall. I just made some adjustments to mke it flow a little more naturally.
30 kwietnia 2024
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