Good afternoon everyone! It's been a while. Today, I'm going to talk you about my summer vacation. I visited various places. I went to Kyoto, Osaka, the mountain and the river. Though it was summer, I didn't go to the beach. I wanted go to the beach but my summer vacation was fun regardless! In Kyoto, I ate odango in Arashiyama. It is a popular place. In Osaka, I went to USJ. I rode many attractions. I recommend that you go to the Harry Potter area, it's fantastic. I also went camping with my friends. I had a barbecue, ate a watermelon, played games and watched fire works. It was a nice day. Another day, I almost worked in my spare time. Those are my memories. Thank you for reading my post!!

Good afternoon everyone! It's been a while. Today, I'm going to talk you about my summer vacation. I visited various places. I went to Kyoto, Osaka, the mountain, and the river. THOUGH (typo) it was summer, I didn't go to the beach. I wanted go to the beach. However, my summer vacation was fun! In Kyoto, I ate odango in Arashiyama. It is A popular place. In Osaka, I went to USJ. I rode many attractions. I reccomend that you go THE Harry Potter area. It's fantastic. And I went camping with my friends. I had a barbecue (OFTEN WE JUST WRITE IT AS BBQ) , watermelon , GAMES (plural) and fireworks (ALL ONE WORD) It was A nice day. Another day, I almost worked in my part-time JOB? . THOSE ARE MY MEMORIES (plural) Thank you for reading my post!! Well done! You write well. You just need to concentrate on articles. Using A or THE