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My favorite place is Minatomirai in Yokohama, Kanagawa prefecture. The area is facing the port and Minatomirai has an amusement park. It has so big Ferris wheel that is always light up.The scenery of there is so beautiful✨We can enjoy not only the scenery but also there are some spots that we can go shopping!! This place where I can act according to what I want to do is my favorite place.
7 lip 2025 10:06
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My favorite place is Minatomirai in Yokohama, Kanagawa prefecture. The area is
facing the port and Minatomirai has an amusement park. It has such a big Ferris
wheel that is always lit up.The scenery there is so beautiful✨We can enjoy
not only the scenery but also there are some places where we can go shopping!!
This place, where I can do what I want to do, is my favorite place.
Well done. Nice writing. Use such with nouns, so with adjectives. So sunny, such sunshine. Lit up as we use the past participle. Hope my corrections help you. Teacher Simon
7 lipca 2025
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