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Quynh
I'm living in Angiang province, a small province in the South of Vietnam. As you know, Vietnam is a tropical nation. The weather is usually hot, especially in city. Ho Chi Minh city is famous about scorching days, of course beside that are many other interesting things. Return with my hometown, Angiang is also hot some places. It's small and there is no beach, but many mountains. It's neither too modern and crowded nor deserted place. I feel this place is a good place to live. Everything is enough for a basic life. The most important thing is the nature is still alright :) many trees, less building and factories. We have rivers, green mountains, schools, hospitals, market and super market. The traffic is also good. The food is delicious and healthy with many vegetable and fruits. People is almost kind. Strangers are easy to find help for direction, food, drinking water and clothes. The culture is also have many typical things with some minority groups. Each group has traditional festivals and clothes.
23 sie 2021 12:47
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I'm living in Angiang province, a small province in the South of Vietnam. As you know, Vietnam is a tropical country (nation is used when speaking of the people, usually). The weather is usually hot, especially in the larger cities. Ho Chi Minh city (aka Saigon) is famous for scorching days, of course beside that there are many other interesting things. Returning to talking about my hometown, Angiang is also hot in some places. It's small and there is no beach, but has many mountains. It's neither too modern, crowded nor deserted place. I feel this place is a good place to live. Everything is enough for a basic life. The most important thing is that the nature/environment is still alright :) many trees, few buildings and factories. We have rivers, green mountains, schools, hospitals, markets and super markets. The traffic is also good, no traffic jams. The food is delicious and healthy with many vegetables and fruits. People is almost kind. Strangers are easy to find help for direction, food, drinking water and clothes. The culture also has many typical things with several minority cultural groups. Each group has traditional festivals and clothes.
23 sierpnia 2021
People is almost kind --> People are mostly kind
25 sierpnia 2021
I'm living in Angiang, a small province in the south of Vietnam. As you know, Vietnam is a tropical nation. The weather is usually hot, especially in the city. Ho Chi Minh City is famous for its scorching days. Of course beside that there are many other interesting things. Angiang is also hot in some places. It's small and there is no beach, but there are many mountains. It's neither too modern and crowded nor a deserted place. I think it's a good place to live. Everything is there for a basic life. The most important thing is that the nature is still alright. There are many trees, less building and factories. We have rivers, green mountains, schools, hospitals, market and a supermarket. The traffic is also good. The food is delicious and healthy with many vegetable and fruits. People are always kind. Strangers will find it easy to get help for directions, food, drinking water and clothes. The culture is also have many typical things with some minority groups. Each group has traditional festivals and clothes.
Hello Quyhn. Overall, that's interesting and well written. I like your use of plenty of adjectives to describe your province. I've made some corrections for you.
23 sierpnia 2021
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