In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's crowded. I also take the train to go to college eve

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In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if I want to get on, it's crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people in overseas!!🚃

9 cze 2025 10:06

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Hi! Great job with your writing. 🌟 Only a few corrections. "I'm interested in how much trains are used by people in overseas!!" ✅️ Correction: "I'm interested in how much trains are used by people overseas!!" (No "in" when saying overseas) 📚 Synonyms for "crowded": ▫️Packed ▫️Full ▫️congested I am from South Africa and we don't use trains for public transport in my country. - Teacher Dani 🌷

9 cze 2025 11:33

In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Students and office workers commute by train, so they are crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if I want to get on, it's too crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people abroad.

9 cze 2025 12:38

In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's packed. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes, even if I want to get on. It's full, and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people overseas!!🚃

9 cze 2025 11:39

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