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Can you correct my paraphrased sentences. Q: Do you have lots of friends? Original: not a lot. I have quite a new friends though I meet a lot of people on marketing events. I think it’s better to have one reliable and trustworthy friend than have many fair-weather friends. it takes time and commitment to know someone inside out but very often friendship ends too soon.  Paraphrased: no I don’t. I guess it’s preferable to have a trustable person as best friend, rather than have numerous friends who just know of each other. Otherwise friendship usually will end easily, and it’s also taking time to make a deep relationship so I don’t have many friends. Q: How often do you see them? Original: oh we usually make time once in two months. My friends and I have busy and stressful jobs so it’s not surprising if we don’t need that often. But we don’t want to get burned out and lose our minds so we made a pact a few years back to make time, get together and just unwind. Paraphrased: we try to see each others once in two months even though we are quite working hard and having a lot of stress, because we need to get energy by seeing each other’s who is knowing for many years and don’t want to forget our youth memory, it’s just make us happy.  Q: What do you usually do when you’re together?  Original: my friends and I are crazy about food, so we like to eat out in our favorite restaurant at least once a week. We talk about our recent life‘s happenings. from time to time, we stay in one of our friends’ house and have for a movie marathon all night long. Nowadays, we are going free diving so that we can cross it out of our bucket lists. Paraphrased: recently we like to go on a free diving to make away from the stress of things we have to do. We also love to eat so often go to nice restaurants and catch up our daily life and sometimes we visit to our house of one of us to watch various movies till the sun comes up.  Thank you for your help!!!
2 cze 2023 10:20
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Q: Do you have lots of friends? Paraphrased: No, I don't have many friends. However, I frequently meet new people at marketing events. I believe it's more valuable to have one dependable and trustworthy friend than to have numerous acquaintances. Developing a deep understanding of someone takes time and commitment, but friendships often end prematurely. Q: How often do you see them? Paraphrased: We usually make time to meet once every two months. Given that my friends and I have demanding and stressful jobs, it's not surprising that we don't meet more frequently. However, we don't want to get burned out and lose our sanity, so we made a pact a few years ago to prioritize spending time together, unwinding and relaxing. Q: What do you usually do when you're together? Paraphrased: Since my friends and I are enthusiastic about food, we enjoy dining out at our favorite restaurant at least once a week. During these gatherings, we discuss recent events in our lives. Occasionally, we have movie marathons throughout the night at one of our homes. Lately, we have also taken up free diving as an activity to cross off from our bucket lists.
2 czerwca 2023
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