When I was eleven I trained natation. In those times I was a little fat however, I was always fast. Once a time me and my team went to a tourney and I had to compete in 400 meter crowl style. I know that the others swimers were more faster than me but that doesn’t matter I was excited and finally I could to achieve the second site. I’m so proud of myself
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When I was eleven I trained swimming. In those times I was a little fat however,
I was always fast. One time, my team and I went to a tourney and I had to
compete in 400 meter crowl style. I know that the other swimmers were
faster than me but that doesn’t matter I was excited and finally I
achieved second place. I’m so proud of myself.
Good job! You had a few incorrect vocabulary choices and minor grammatical mistakes but it was easy to understand.
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When I was eleven, I trained in swimming. At that time, I was a little fat; however, I was always fast. My team and I went to a tournament one time, and I had to compete in a 400-meter crawl style. I knew that the others swimmers were faster than me, but that did not matter. I was excited, and finally, I achieved second place. I was so proud of myself.
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