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naiho_3
Yesterday, I stayed at my friend’s house and went to school from there. After school, I had my crepe part-time job, but I forgot to bring my work clothes, so I went home. My friend gave me a ride to my house by car. We listened to music together in the car, and it was really fun because we like the same kind of music. We also talked a lot about friends and love.
11 lip 2025 02:16
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Yesterday, I stayed at my friend’s house and went to school from there. After school, I had my crappy (?) part-time job, but I forgot to bring my work clothes, so I went home. My friend gave me a ride to my house. We listened to music together in the car, and it was really fun because we like the same kind of music. We also talked a lot about friends and love.
Nice! Unless your job is making crepes I think you mean crappy (soft version of shitty). I don’t think you need to specify that your friend is giving you a ride by car, that is what I would assume to be true, and I’d only specify the mode of transportation if it were in fact something out of the ordinary - like a bike or canoe :). It isn’t wrong however, just not something I’d say.
11 lip 2025 04:06
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