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wendy
I have just heard a bad news. someone dropped off a highway while driving due to the collasped bridge in a bad flood. Someone always tell us that if you are brave enough, you can do anything, but we also always ignore the potential dangers. If someone invit you to climb the Evenrest, you can definitely imgage the diffculties you might face, but you won't let a heavy rain prevent you from a self-driving tour. We usually think that we are tiny in front of the nature after experiencing some bad things, such as blood and hurricane. We always learn a lesson from the nature and forget it as fast as we can. Then we learn another lesson and ....... I think that only we respect the nature, then we can have a chance to explore it. The nature provides a variety of suprises waiting us to find, but it's not that easy to find them. We need to experiece a lot which helps us to understand the world well. The nature helps us abandon arrogance and gives us modesty. If you want to fight with the nature to prove you are smart or brave, your are absolutely wrong!
22 lip 2024 08:36
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I have just heard some bad news. someone dropped off a highway while driving due to a collasped bridge in the bad flood. People always tell us that if you are
brave enough, you can do anything, but we also always ignore the potential
dangers. If someone invites you to climb Everest, you can definitely imagine
the diffculties you might face, but you won't let heavy rain prevent you from
a self-driving tour. We usually think that we are tiny in front of nature
after experiencing some bad things, such as floods and hurricanes. We always learn
a lesson from nature and forget it as fast as we can. Then we learn another
lesson and ....... I think that only we respect nature, then we can have a
chance to explore it. Nature provides a variety of suprises waiting for us to
find, but it's not that easy to find them. We need to experiece a lot which
helps us to understand the world well. Nature helps us to abandon arrogance and to give
us modesty. If you want to fight with nature to prove you are smart or
brave, your
are absolutely wrong!
Well done Wendy. The main thing here is your use of uncountable nouns. Nature. Rain. Etc. These are uncountable so they don’t need an article in front of them. And always singular.
22 lipca 2024
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chiński (mandaryński), angielski
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