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Lisa
I would like to correct the essay below in terms of grammar, word usage and content. (topic: As a medical student what can you do to become a good doctor?) Today, AI technologies are getting better and better, and humans are replaced by AI in the medical fields. In such an era, doctors’ roles must be different from what AI can give to patients. For example, presenting medications considering their values and backgrounds and talking to them based on what doctors have experienced are what AI is not capable of. Therefore, a medical student has to study hard, acquire medical etiquette, and engage in various activities in order to be a good doctor. First, working hard on their study is significant. Even though AI is widespread which has a quick access to tremendous amount of knowledge, doctors need to know a lot about diseases. For example, AI might perform a surgery, but doctors still diagnose and decide what surgery is effective. Thus, it is necessary for medical students to study hard on their major. Second, students need to be aware of the medical etiquette. There are rules of hoe doctors should think towards certain cases. For instance, they should not stop treatments without patients’ or their families’ permissions even if their recovery seems impossible. This kind of way of thinking is not acquired in a short period, so students need to learn about it and practice it while in school in order to be a doctor with the proper ethics. Third, students having a lot of experience is significant. They improve themselves by meeting new people and facing difficulties in activities. For example, they find ways to deal with problems on relations through club activities. Moreover, they get new perspectives, which is essential for flexible thinking in utilizing AI and collaborating with other professionals, who have different ideas from doctors. Therefore, it is important for students to take part in various new activities.
10 gru 2024 15:34
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continuing from above: The importance of making a great effort on study, learning the medical etiquette, and working on new things have been explained above. Thus, by doing so, a student would be able to become a good doctor. AI may be a threat to the medical field at a glance. However, understanding roles of doctors and knowing to coexist with AI will make them a good professional.
10 grudnia 2024