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Dear Mr. Griffin,
I am writing in response to your advertisement about language summer school in London. Therefore, I would like to apply for a position of a helper in your organization.
I have an experience of being a volunteer in my local eco-community, and I have also participated in several sport competitions at school. This supports the fact that I am an active team worker. Along with that, I have taken ILTS exam, which stand for my English proficiency and proves the fact that I have acquired B1 level. In addition, I would like to add the information about my part-time job as a babysitter. I have worked with children for one year, so I am accustomed to spending time with them.
I would like to build my career in a sports field. Hence, the vacancy which you offer is a perfect opportunity for me to develop my communication skills which directly connected to practicing my English, as well as to gain new knowledge. I would love to become one of the members of the team and spend summer in a dynamic environment.
I look forward to hearing from you,
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