Hi everyone, could somebody help me if the next paragraph is it correct? Thanks in advance.

*Professional profile*

Organized, responsable and analytical with more than nine years of experience in project coordination. Highly motivated in self-learning, with desire to being part of a strategic company to developing and implementing actions that help its growth and success.

Question

Hi everyone, could somebody  help me if the next paragraph is it correct? Thanks in advance.

*Professional profile*

Organized, responsable and analytical with more than nine years of experience in project coordination. Highly motivated in self-learning, with desire to being part of a strategic company to developing and implementing actions that help its growth and success.

Answer

I would just change it a little bit:

*Professional profile*

Organized, responsable and analytical with more than nine years of experience in project coordination. Highly motivated self-learner, with a desire to be part of a strategic company to develop and implement actions that help its growth and success.

I might also change the last bit to “help it grow and succeed”, but it works how it is too 🙂

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