Last year I went to Hong Kong with my friend. but it was not fun in there because many problems happened. First, my SIM card that I bought at the airport in Japan didn’t use. It was terrible. It was inconvenient because I couldn’t use my phone so I wanted to buy new it, but my friend said I think didn’t need one. And we did what my friend wanted to do instead. It was my fault that it didn’t work but I didn’t feel happy.
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Last year, I went to Hong Kong with my friend, but it was not a fun experience because many problems happened. First, the SIM card that I bought at the airport in Japan did not work. It was terrible. It was very inconvenient because I couldn’t use my phone. I wanted to buy a new one, but my friend said that I probably didn’t need one. Instead, we did what my friend wanted to do. I know it was my fault that the SIM card didn’t work, but I still didn’t feel happy.
Level: B2.
Your writing is clear and you are able to describe a past experience and express your feelings well. You explain the situation logically and give enough details for the reader to understand what happened. To improve further, focus on past tense forms, articles, and natural expressions. Keep practising, your ability to communicate your ideas is improving! 😊
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