阿廖沙
I like life to have changes, because I think I am a preson , who will not be in rut. Changes are so important for youths. As the saying goes, live and learn. The change is a good way to achieve it . Everybody needs to control themselves, and control change is the best key.
19 maj 2025 01:47
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Improvements to grammar, word choice, and clarity: I prefer life to have changes because I believe I am a person who doesn’t want to stay in a rut. Change is especially important for young people. As the saying goes, "Live and learn." Change is a good way to achieve personal growth. Everyone needs self-control, and being able to manage change is one of the most important keys to success.
19 maj 2025 01:58
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