جيد جدًا، بالتوفيق!ا

great, good sentences. Your level of writing is good, there are some simple mistakes in the use of sentence-linking tools, I advise you to develop writing by read in different texts suitable for your linguistic level, for example, read some Arabic stories at levels from A1 to C2, and start at level A2.. Also, it is better to study Arabic from a disciplined educational series according to the European framework of reference (cefer), this makes your level in all skills consistent, and develops you in writing well..