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Great text, and great question. I think there’s a lot of fear now of robots stealing our jobs. I would recommend watching a TED Talk from Sal Khan about AI and classes and the Khan academy, it’s a similar topic, https://www.ted.com/talks/sal_khan_how_ai_could_save_not_destroy_education