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I bought a CD on Tuesday. It’s a full album. The artist is TOMORROW X TOGETHER. I love this group. Since I was a junior high school student, I have loved them. They are Korean idol. But they come Japan many times. My favorite member had visited the place where my home town’s tourists spot. I was very surprised it. Because my home town is so countryside. I like my home town, but it’s not famous place. When I heard the news, I felt happiness. I want to stay in the same Inn. I will go to their concert in November and December. It is winter, so it will be cold. But I like to wear clothing when it’s cold days. It looks pretty. And I think winter is better than summer. I don’t spend by hot weather. I hate hot weather! I’m very looking forward to snow, hot snacks, and Christmas.
23 paź 2025 14:31
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I bought a CD on Tuesday. It was a full album. The artist is TOMORROW X TOGETHER. I loved this group ever Since I was a junior high school student. They are Korean idols But they have come to Japan many times. My favorite member visited my home towns’ tourist spots. I was very surprised Because my home town is deep in the countryside. I like my home town, but it’s not a famous place. When I heard the news, I felt happy. I want to stay in the same Inn. I will go to their concert in November and December. It is winter, so it will be cold. I like to wear winter clothing on cold days because It looks pretty. I think winter is better than summer. I hate hot weather! I’m really looking forward to snow, hot snacks, and Christmas.
良く書けていますよ!とても読むのが楽しかったです✨ その韓国のアイドルグループについてあまり詳しくないんですが、一番好きなアイドルが自分の出身の観光地を訪れてなんてびっくりしますね!私も夏より冬が好きです❄️ ホリデーシーズンだしですから🎁 この調子で勉強し頑張ってくださいね!
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25 paź 2025 07:18
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