Can you correct me please? I asked her “How do you usually spend your evening?” She replied: “as a mom of three kids, I usually haven’t [don’t have - AmEng] enough time to do what I want. But I try my best to create personal time. (So how do I do this?) I try to put my children to bed early. It is healthy for them and (it is) convenient for me. After they go to sleep, I have time for me. (And to return to the question of how I usually spend my time, I can say that) I usually watch my favorite TV series and movies or (instead of watching) I read a book. That’s how I usually spend my evening.

Can you correct me please? I asked her “How do you usually spend your evening(s)?” She replied, “As a mom for three kids , I usually haven’t enough time to do what I want. But I do my best to carve out some time of my own. You might ask, "How do you do that?" Here's how. I try to send my children to bed early. It is both healthy for them and convenient for me. Then, with them asleep, I gain time for myself. Let me now return to the question of how I generally spend my time. I typically watch my favorite tv series and movies or instead, I read a book . That’s how I normally spend my evening. Quoted sentences begin with a capital letter, even if they occur in the middle of a sentence: "She replied, 'As a mom for three kids , ... You have some run-on sentences. For example, your sentence that begins "And return..." contains FIVE independent clauses. Most sentences should have just one main clause, accompanied by subordinate clauses and phrases that can, but do not need to, have any subject+verb combination. You use the word "usually" four times. This word has many synonyms that you can add for variety.