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The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s drizzly today. Last night, Chloe invited me for a sleepover. From my parents’ point of view, it was more like a “drink-over” since they stayed up late drinking. Chloe’s dad is a police officer who loves sharing creepy true stories. We enjoy them, but sometimes they're scary. It makes me realize that a serial killer or kidnapper could look completely normal, and they commonly approach you acting like a nice folk. I need to stay alert around strangers. You can never be too careful!
27 lip 2024 12:06
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It’s drizzly today. Last night, Chloe invited me for a sleepover. From my
parents’ point of view, it was more like a “drink-over” since they stayed up
late drinking. Chloe’s dad is a police officer who loves sharing creepy true
stories. We enjoy them, but sometimes they're scary. It makes me realize that a
serial killer or kidnapper could look completely normal, and they commonly
approach you acting like they are nice. I need to stay alert around strangers. You
can never be too careful!
This is a difficult one. We don’t really want to live in a world where we distrust everyone. But then we know there are some, very few, who might cause harm. My niece was almost taken by a notorious killer in England, just thinking about it upsets me.
27 lipca 2024
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It’s drizzly today. Last night, Chloe invited me for a sleepover. From my
parents’ point of view, it was more like a “drink-over” since they stayed up
late drinking. Chloe’s dad is a police officer who loves sharing creepy true
stories. We enjoy them, but sometimes they're scary. It makes me realize that a
serial killer or kidnapper could look completely normal and they often
approach you acting like nice people. I need to stay alert around strangers. You
can never be too careful!
“Folk” (plural) isn’t commonly used nowadays- “nice people” or “a nice person” sounds more natural. Good job!
27 lipca 2024
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The Tim じぁん!!!
Znajomość języków
chiński (mandaryński), angielski, japoński
Język do nauczenia się
angielski
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